Do you believe in love at first sight? Why or why not?

2023-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Mika

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I strongly agree with that because I have a lot of experiences about falling in love at the first sight. Not that I think about it, it\'s pretty to smile about all the things I have in common with people I fell in love with at a glance. It made me flutter. As far as I\'m concerned, most of people don\'t believe the fact that they haven\'t been through. :)

강사 첨삭

Wonderful Wednesday to you, Elic! You are more than capable of accomplishing more than you could ever imagine. With determination, persistence, and hard work, anything can be possible. You are awesome!

I strongly agree with that because I have a lot of experiences about falling in love at the first sight.
>>> I strongly agree with that because I have had a lot of experiences with falling in love at first sight.

Not that I think about it, it\'s pretty to smile about all the things I have in common with people I fell in love with at a glance.
>>> Not that I think about it; it\'s pretty to smile about all the things I have in common with people I fell in love with at a glance.

It made me flutter.
>>> CORRECT.

As far as I\'m concerned, most of people don\'t believe the fact that they haven\'t been through.
>>> As far as I\'m concerned, most people don\'t believe that they haven\'t been through anything.

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