Do you believe in ‘love at first time’?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, I believe that!
I had experienced that feeling when I met my present boyfriend. I saw him at my friend’s wedding, and we fell in love each other at first time we met. Before I’m going out him, I thought that the first impression is not perfectly right. But my boyfriend has been same with the first impression!!
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Good day, Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Of course, I believe that!
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I believe in that situation.
I had experienced that feeling when I met my present boyfriend.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I had that experience when my present boyfriend and I met.
I saw him at my friend’s wedding, and we fell in love each other at first time we met.
>> I saw him at my friend’s wedding, and we fell in love with each other the first time we met.
Before I’m going out him, I thought that the first impression is not perfectly right.
>> Before going out with him, I thought that the first impression is not perfectly right.
OR >> Before going out together, I thought that the first impression is not perfectly right.
But my boyfriend has been same with the first impression!!
>> But, my boyfriend has been the same with the first impression I had with him!
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