Do you believe in superheroes? Why or why not?
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I don\'t believe super heroes.
>> I don\'t believe in super heroes.
There is just a normal heroes in society but they are no super heroes.
>> There are just normal heroes in society but they are not super heroes.
Super herores can do anything.But normal heroes power is limited.
>> Super heroes can do anything but normal heroes\' power is limited.
In Society there is a small heroes.We can read the articles about normal heroes in the newspaper.
>> In our society, there are just few heroes. We can read articles about normal heroes in the newspaper.
Super heroes can\'t be appear.It can be apper in Marvel Movie.
>> Super heroes only appears in Marvel movies.
In this society I think helping someone like surviving a baby in the buring building or a captain saved the passengers lives in danger is a real heroes.
>> In this society, I think helping someone like saving a baby from falling in a building or a captain who saves passengers in danger are real heroes.
Because someone dressed up like a tanos and say \"Where is a stone?\"or someone make a spider web using a glue and saying \"I am spiderman\" people will think he or she is mad.
>> Because if someone is dressed up like Thanos saying, \'Where is the stone?\' or if someone makes a spider web using glue saying he is Spiderman, people will think he or she is mad.
So,superheroes can be seen in movies.Firefighter and police officer and captain of the ship is a hero in our society.
>> So, super heroes can only be seen in movies. Firefighter, police officers and ship captains are the heroes in our society.
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