Do you believe in the power of taking breaks to recharge? How do you incorporate them into your rout
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe in the power of taking breaks to recharge.
I can feel much better and refresh, when I go to my hometown.
so, when I get the stress, I go to home and spend time with father and puppy.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Taking breaks is so important! It’s great that spending time in your hometown with your father and puppy helps you feel refreshed.
~Kelly^^
I believe in the power of taking breaks to recharge.
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OR:
>> I believe in the importance of taking breaks to recharge.
I can feel much better and refresh, when I go to my hometown.
>> I feel much better and refreshed when I go to my hometown.
so, when I get the stress, I go to home and spend time with father and puppy.
>>So, when I feel stressed, I go home and spend time with my father and puppy.
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