Do you believe in the saying \"money is the root of all evil\"?
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Well, it\'s a tough question. I don\'t believe money is the root of all evil. But, it could turn out problem for the money. From where I stand, money is a substance that people can show what they really are. So, money can tell if people are good or bad.
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Well, it\'s a tough question.
>> CORRECT!I don\'t believe money is the root of all evil.
>> CORRECT!But, it could turn out problem for the money.
>> But, it could bring out problems for the money.
From where I stand, money is a substance that people can show what they really are.
>> CORRECT!So, money can tell if people are good or bad.
>> CORRECT!
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