Do you believe in the saying that "Life starts at 40"?

2014-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Life can start at any age even at 60 or at 70. It is true that it is never too late to start something. However, we cannot deny that there is the proper time to start because of our physical conditions. As we are getting older, our bodies will be getting weakened. It does not function the way we desire. Let’s say that you want to learn riding a motor cycle when you are at the age of 60. It is possible, but it will require you to spend ten times as much energy, time, and money as you do in your 20’s. Even for studying, you can begin to learn new things or to prepare an exam for CPA, a lawyer, or a doctor when you are 40 or 50, but your brain won’t work as fast as it did when you were 10 or 20. You have to invest five times more to memorize something compared with the time when you were in your 20’s. When we were young, our parents were used to say that everything has the right timing to do. There are too much constraints for you to challenge something when you pass the right time.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]! Happy hump day! I hope that you are having a wonderful week. I totally agree with you. As long we believe in ourself, we can learn a lot of things. Age doesn\'t matter in terms of learning. We just need to think positive. You did a marvelous job again! Talk to you later. Teacher Nina   Life can start at any age even at 60 or at 70. >> Correct >> OR: Life can start at any age even at 60 or 70. It is true that it is never too late to start something. >> Correct >> OR: It is true that it is never too late to start something new. However, we cannot deny that there is the proper time to start because of our physical conditions. >> However, we cannot deny that there is a proper time to start because of our physical conditions. As we are getting older, our bodies will be getting weakened. >> As we are getting older, our bodies will get weaker. It does not function the way we desire. >> Correct Let’s say that you want to learn riding a motor cycle when you are at the age of 60. >> Correct It is possible, but it will require you to spend ten times as much energy, time, and money as you do in your 20’s. >> Correct Even for studying, you can begin to learn new things or to prepare an exam for CPA, a lawyer, or a doctor when you are 40 or 50, but your brain won’t work as fast as it did when you were 10 or 20. >> Correct >> OR: Even with studying, you can begin to learn new things or to prepare an exam for CPA, lawyer or a doctor when you are at the age of forty or fifty. But your brain won\'t function as it did when you were at the age of ten or twenty. You have to invest five times more to memorize something compared with the time when you were in your 20’s. >> Correct When we were young, our parents were used to say that everything has the right timing to do. >> Correct There are too much constraints for you to challenge something when you pass the right time. >> Correct

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