Do you believe in this; \"Success comes when one finds direction?\" Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it\'s true.
Because sometimes, it\'s hard to decide the way to live. Like for example, which job to choose.
And also if you find a way that you like, u can concentrate on that job and success.
So it\'s important and necessary.
Thank you :-) And have a nice weekend...!
-The End-
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you.
Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
Do you believe in this; \\\"Success comes when one finds direction?\\\" Explain.
I think it\'s true.
Because sometimes, it\'s hard to decide the way to live. Like for example, which job to choose.
Because sometimes, it\'s hard to decide the way to live. Like for example, which job to choose.
>>> I think it\'s true because sometimes, it\'s hard to decide how to live. Like for example, which job to choose.
And also if you find a way that you like, u can concentrate on that job and success.
So it\'s important and necessary.
>>> Also if you find a way of life that you like, then you can concentrate on that job and be successful. So it\'s important and necessary at the same time.
So it\'s important and necessary.
>>> Also if you find a way of life that you like, then you can concentrate on that job and be successful. So it\'s important and necessary at the same time.
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