Do you believe on this statement; \"Our healthy choices are our hope to help reduce the risk of gett
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I think I do because I think it is true!
For example, Even though you have a sore throat and it even hurts to swallow, Taking medicines and eating foods that are good for you and your neck like mashed potatoes.
Also, to prevent, you can exercise and eat healthy foods :)
And also wash your hands!
And it is a hope too :)
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Do you believe on this statement; \"Our healthy choices are our hope to help reduce the risk of getting sick?\"
I think I do because I think it is true!
>>> CORRECT
For example, Even though you have a sore throat and it even hurts to swallow, Taking medicines and eating foods that are good for you and your neck like mashed potatoes.
>>> For example, if you have sore throat and it\'s painful every time you swallow taking medicine can help but it would be better to eat healthy foods and avoid those sweets or anything that will cause you to have it again.
Also, to prevent, you can exercise and eat healthy foods :)
>>> To prevent it, you can also exercise and eat healthy foods.
And also wash your hands!
And it is a hope too
>>> Moreover, always wash your hands.
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