Do you believe that a dog is a \"man\'s best friend\"?
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I totally agree that a dog is a best friend of human. I am a dog person. When I do workout, I see lots of dogs. I want to touch them, I desire to stroke the dog\'s head, but I can\'t. I have a plan to move to a detached house, before I am 60 age. It\'s because, I want to have a dog. And then, I am going to spend time with the dog for rest of my life.
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Good day, Sir [이름]ny!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleI totally agree that a dog is a best friend of human.
>> I totally agree that a dog is a best friend of humans.
I am a dog person.
>> CORRECT!
When I do workout, I see lots of dogs.
>> CORRECT!
I want to touch them, I desire to stroke the dog\'s head, but I can\'t.
>> CORRECT!
I have a plan to move to a detached house, before I am 60 age.
>> I have a plan to move to a detached house, before I reach the age of 60.
It\'s because, I want to have a dog.
>> CORRECT!
And then, I am going to spend time with the dog for rest of my life.
>> CORRECT!
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