Do you believe that achieving one\'s dreams requires luck, hard work, or a combination of both?
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I personally think achieving one\'s dreams requires a combination of both for 70% of effort and 30% of luck. For example, it\'s bad luck if I only show things I didn\'t study when I took a test. But, I studied a little, I\'m lucky if I only get what I know.
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Happy Monday, Eric! I have read your homework and it was fantastic! Thank you for pouring out your thoughts regarding the question. Keep it up!
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A: I personally think achieving one\'s dreams requires a combination of both for 70% of effort and 30% of luck. For example, it\'s bad luck if I only show things I didn\'t study when I took a test. But, I studied a little, I\'m lucky if I only get what I know.
>> In my opinion, realizing one\'s aspirations involves a balance of 70% effort and 30% luck. For instance, not preparing adequately for an exam and only relying on chance is unlucky. However, with some amount of preparation, it could be considered fortunate to only be tested on what one knows.
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