Do you believe that blood is thicker than water?
학생이 쓴 원문
“Blood is thicker than water” is meaning relationship on family than friendship.
We must follow the relationship on family and blood without my choice.
Especially, family protect each other more than others in a difficult situation.
So I can understand that blood is thicker than water.
강사 첨삭
Hello Joey, I really appreciate you for showing your understanding of the meaning behind the proverb “Blood is thicker than water.” You expressed your thoughts well about the importance of family bonds, especially during hard times. I made a few grammatical corrections to make your sentences sound more natural and clear. For example, “is meaning relationship on family than friendship” should be “means that family relationships are stronger than friendships,” which fits better in English.
I also appreciate how much effort you put into writing this. You explained not just the proverb’s meaning but also why you agree with it, which gives depth to your answer. I also love that your sentences show sincerity and reflection.
~ T. Lia
“Blood is thicker than water” is meaning relationship on family than friendship.
>> “Blood is thicker than water” means that family relationships are stronger than friendships.
We must follow the relationship on family and blood without my choice.
>> We must value family and blood relationships even when we don’t have a choice.
Especially, family protect each other more than others in a difficult situation.
>> Especially, families protect each other more than anyone else in difficult situations.
So I can understand that blood is thicker than water.
>> CORRECT
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