Do you believe that external validation is necessary for feelings of satisfaction?
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I don\'t think external validation is not necessary for feelings of satisfaction.
This is because each person has different criteria for feelings of satisfaction, so external validation or evaluation may be useless.
However, external validation or evaluation can be one thing that affects your chioce.
For example, for those who like quiet places, a library is a space that gives them satisfaction, but not for those who don\'t.
Also, there are people who are satisfied with small or ordinary things, but there are people who are satisfied with big or special things.
So, I don\'t think external validation or evaluation is not necessary for feelings of satisfaction.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!~
I completely agree that since we have our own standards and differences, we shouldn\'t depend on the acceptance of others. Let\'s quit trying to please others because it keeps you from being happy and true to yourself. .
Chammy
No, I don\'t think external validation is not necessary for feelings of satisfaction.
>> No, I don\'t think external validation is necessary for feelings of satisfaction.
OR
>> I don\'t think we need people\'s approval to feel satisfied.
This is because each person has different criteria for feelings of satisfaction, so external validation or evaluation may be useless.
OR
>> This is because everyone has various standards for what defines a sense of fulfillment, therefore others\' approval or assessment may be pointless.
However, external validation or evaluation can be one thing that affects your chioce.
>> However, external validation or evaluation can be one thing that affects your choice.
For example, for those who like quiet places, a library is a space that gives them satisfaction, but not for those who don\'t.
>> Correct
Also, there are people who are satisfied with small or ordinary things, but there are people who are satisfied with big or special things.
Or
>> In addition, some people are content with little things, while others are content with grand or unique things.
So, I don\'t think external validation or evaluation is not necessary for feelings of satisfaction.
>> So, I don\'t think external validation or evaluation is necessary for feelings of satisfaction.
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