Do you believe that inborn/ innate talents are better than learned? What do you think? Explain.

2020-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Annie

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I think I don\'t know for sure because they have their own advantages and disadvantage. For inborn talents, you don\'t need any money for classes and also you can have your own style than just the style they want. And the disadvantage is that you can give up easily because you didn\'t learn one by one. On the other hand, the advantage of learned is that because you have learned basic things, you can do it for a long time. And the disadvantage is that you won\'t learn your true style and you can get stressed whenever you are wrong, and people who teach you will get really mad. So I think it\'s up to themselves to choose which way will be suitable and more beneficial for you, and I think they will find their own path to choose. ( but personally, I am on inborn side because even in life, it\'s really important to find your own path and style, even without anyone helping you, That is how you make your own path of learning, working, even choosing anything that depends your life on it. ) The End

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Hello [이름],

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work! 

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)



Do you believe that inborn/ innate talents are better than learned? 
What do you think? Explain.

I think I don\'t know for sure because they have their own advantages and disadvantage.
>>> I\'m not really sure because they have their own advantages and disadvantage.

For inborn talents, you don\'t need any money for classes and also you can have your own style than just the style they want.
>>> For inborn talents, you don\'t need any money for classes and also you can have your own style than just following the style they want.

And the disadvantage is that you can give up easily because you didn\'t learn one by one.
>>> And the disadvantage is that you can easily give up because you didn\'t learn it.

On the other hand, the advantage of learned is that because you have learned basic things, you can do it for a long time.
>>> On the other hand, the advantage of skill/talents that you learned is that you can do it for a longer time because you have learned the basics.

And the disadvantage is that you won\'t learn your true style and you can get stressed whenever you are wrong, and people who teach you will get really mad.
>>> The disadvantage is that you won\'t find your own style and you will be stressed whenever you commit a mistake, and your teacher will get really mad.

So I think it\'s up to themselves to choose which way will be suitable and more beneficial for you, and I think they will find their own path to choose.
>>> So I think it\'s up to them to choose which way will be suitable and beneficial for you, and I think they will find their own path for you not you doing it.

( but personally, I am on inborn side because even in life, it\'s really important to find your own path and style, even without anyone helping you, 
>>> But personally, I am on the inborn side because even in life, it\'s really important to find your own path and style, even without anyone helping you.

That is how you make your own path of learning, working, even choosing anything that depends your life on it.
>>> That is how you make your own path of learning, working, even choosing because it is where your life will depend on.

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