Do you believe that social media do more harm than good?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. It\'s because I saw many dangerous case of social media. Of course it helps us to know the world\'s news but it broke out many crime incident by social media. I think the social media services are helpful but also it is a waste of our life. We have learn about how to control to use and distinguish fake news.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Daisy.
Thank you for answering this question. I agree that social media sometimes do more harm than good.
Although it is a good source of news and information, it can also be an avenue of crime and abuse.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
Thank you for answering this question. I agree that social media sometimes do more harm than good.
Although it is a good source of news and information, it can also be an avenue of crime and abuse.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
>> Yes, it does.
It\'s because I saw many dangerous case of social media.
>> It\'s because I saw many dangerous cases on social media.
Of course it helps us to know the world\'s news but it broke out many crime incident by social media.
>> Of course it helps us to know the world\'s news but it caused many criminal incidents on social media.
I think the social media services are helpful but also it is a waste of our life.
>> I think the social media services are helpful but they also waste our time.
We have learn about how to control to use and distinguish fake news.
>> We have to learn how to control its use and distinguish fake news.
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