Do you believe that sometimes tough love is necessary for personal growth?

2024-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

I\'m not big on tough love. I like easy love. We have a lot of difficult for life. I holp it\'s easy even for love. I should be happy to love. I want to shine love. There is this words of song in our country \" tough love were not love\". I don\'t know that tough love is necessary for personal growth. I think that love is happy, is fun, is great, is fantastic. I hope that allowed easy love.

강사 첨삭

Hello Eva,

Thank you for your homework! You did a wonderful job sharing your thoughts on love. I am so proud of you for expressing your feelings so clearly. Your idea that love should be easy and bring happiness is beautiful, and it shows your kind heart.

I appreciate your unique view on tough love. It’s important to think about how we want to experience love in our lives. Your writing shows that you value happiness and joy in love, which is truly inspiring.

Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your thoughts in the future. You are doing amazing!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I\'m not big on tough love.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I\'m not a fan of tough love.

I like easy love.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I prefer love that is easy.

We have a lot of difficult for life.

>>We already have a lot of difficulties in life.

I holp it\'s easy even for love.

>>I hope that love can be easy.

I should be happy to love.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Loving should make me happy.

I want to shine love.

>>I want love to shine.

There is this words of song in our country \" tough love were not love\".

>>There’s a line in a song from our country that says, \'Tough love is not love.\'

I don\'t know that tough love is necessary for personal growth.

>>I don\'t think that tough love is necessary for personal growth.

I think that love is happy, is fun, is great, is fantastic.

>>I think that love is happy, fun, great, and fantastic.

I hope that allowed easy love.

>>I hope that easy love is allowed.

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