Do you believe that the rich are growing richer, and the poor are growing poorer? Why do you think s

2020-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Do you believe that the rich are growing richer, and the poor are growing poorer? Why do you think so? I believe so because human beings are greedy and money makes more money by investments.

강사 첨삭

What you are saying is true.

Human beings have become more greedy over the years.

I hop you have a merry Christmas. ^^

~t. Ally

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I believe so because human beings are greedy and money makes more money by investments.

>> I believe so, because human beings are greedy, and they make more money by investing.

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