Do you believe that the rich are growing richer, and the poor are growing poorer? Why or why not?

2021-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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In the case of Korea, I don\'t think so. Of course, some rich people will use unclean methods. Overall, I think there is a fair opportunity.

강사 첨삭

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T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


In the case of Korea, I don\'t think so.

>> CORRECT!
Of course, some rich people will use unclean methods.

>> CORRECT!

OR

>> Of course, some rich people will use dodgy methods.
Overall, I think there is a fair opportunity.

>> CORRECT!


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dodgy - false or dishonest

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