Do you believe that the rich are growing richer, and the poor are growing poorer? Please explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is almost true. many riches give their son and daughter much property. so They easily become rich compared to their efforts. on the other hand, It is so difficult that the poorer become rich. because they can\'t receive high-quality education service and when they want to set up the business, they feel hard to raise money
강사 첨삭
Short and simple but you were able to share your opinions effectively.
I definitely agree with your point.
Being rich has become an inheritance.
Great composition today!
~Teacher Eve.
I think it is almost true.
>> Correct!
many riches give their son and daughter much property.
>> Many rich people give their sons and daughters a lot of properties.
so They easily become rich compared to their efforts.
>> So they easily become rich in contrast to their efforts.
on the other hand, It is so difficult that the poorer become rich.
>> On the other hand, it is so difficult for the poor to become rich.
because they can\'t receive high-quality education service and when they want to set up the business, they feel hard to raise money
>> Because they can\'t receive a high-quality of educational service and when they want to set up their own business, they feel the hardship of raising money.
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