Do you believe that the rich are growing richer, and the poor are growing poorer?
학생이 쓴 원문
In a capitalist country, the life of the rich can grow,I think poverty
and the rich also change by their own efforts.
If the rich don’t try, they can be poor.
If the poor try, they can become rich.
I\'ve heard there are three good opportunities in life, but I often don\'t notice.
Even if you are a rich person, the three generations will not continue without effort.
This is true.
If you want the rich to continue to be rich, it have to also an effort to keep the rich.
country can\'t save a poverty.
강사 첨삭
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In a capitalist country, the life of the rich can grow,I think poverty and the rich also change by their own efforts.
>>In a capitalist country, the life of the rich can get better and I think the poor and the rich can both change by their own efforts.
If the rich don’t try, they can be poor.
If the rich don’t try, they can be poor.
>>CORRECT!
If the poor try, they can become rich.
If the poor try, they can become rich.
>>If the poor will try, they can also become rich.
I\'ve heard there are three good opportunities in life, but I often don\'t notice.
I\'ve heard there are three good opportunities in life, but I often don\'t notice.
>>I\'ve heard that there are three good opportunities in life but I often don\'t notice them.
Even if you are a rich person, the three generations will not continue without effort.
Even if you are a rich person, the three generations will not continue without effort.
>>Even if you are a rich person, the three opportunities will not come if you do not continue with your efforts.
This is true.
This is true.
>>CORRECT!
If you want the rich to continue to be rich, it have to also an effort to keep the rich.
If you want the rich to continue to be rich, it have to also an effort to keep the rich.
>>If you want the rich to continue to be rich, they also have to keep working hard.
country can\'t save a poverty.
country can\'t save a poverty.
>>The government can\'t save you from poverty.
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