Do you believe that their is a possibility of human existence in the other planet? Why and why not?

2018-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Universe is large, beyond our imagination. Frankly, I completely believe the existence of aliens which is still living the other planet far distance from the earth. But i might be the different creature comparing to the human. Because, we humans are created by some chemistrical accident involving water, other elements. Futhermore, the earth has gone through huge upsets many times and human is latest one. Dinosour and reptiles already prospered hundred thousands years ago. We are the products from cutting-edged technology of evolution. By the way, return to the topic, I am certain that the existence of the aliens must be over the universe. But it will not be the shape of human. They evolve themselves in suitable form to be close to their planet. It is definitely logical. This is my opinion:) Article: https://www.nytimes.com/2018/04/29/opinion/military-transgender-ban.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fopinion-editorials It's related to Transgender issue. See you Wednesday.

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Universe is large, beyond our imagination.

>> The universe is large beyond our imagination.

Frankly, I completely believe the existence of aliens which is still living the other planet far distance from the earth.

>> Frankly, I completely believe in the existence of aliens who/which might still be living in the other planet far from the Earth.

But i might be the different creature comparing to the human.

>> But it might be different creatures compared to a human.

Because, we humans are created by some chemistrical accident involving water, other elements.

>> Because, we humans are created by some molecular accident involving water and other elements.

Futhermore, the earth has gone through huge upsets many times and human is latest one.

>> Futhermore, the earth has gone through huge upsets many times and human is the latest one.

Dinosour and reptiles already prospered hundred thousands years ago.
>> Correct

or

>> Dinosaur and reptiles existed hundred thousands years ago.
 We are the products from cutting-edged technology of evolution.

>> We are products from a cutting-edge technology of evolution.

By the way, return to the topic, I am certain that the existence of the aliens must be over the universe.

>> By the way, going back to the topic, I am certain that the existence of aliens must be past the universe.

But it will not be the shape of human.

>> But not the same of that of humans.

They evolve themselves in suitable form to be close to their planet. It is definitely logical.

>> They evolve in a suitable form to be close to their planet. It is definitely logical.

 This is my opinion:)

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