Do you believe that their is a possibility of human existence in the other planet? Why and why not?
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Universe is large, beyond our imagination.
>> The universe is large beyond our imagination.
Frankly, I completely believe the existence of aliens which is still living the other planet far distance from the earth.
>> Frankly, I completely believe in the existence of aliens who/which might still be living in the other planet far from the Earth.
But i might be the different creature comparing to the human.
>> But it might be different creatures compared to a human.
Because, we humans are created by some chemistrical accident involving water, other elements.
>> Because, we humans are created by some molecular accident involving water and other elements.
Futhermore, the earth has gone through huge upsets many times and human is latest one.
>> Futhermore, the earth has gone through huge upsets many times and human is the latest one.
Dinosour and reptiles already prospered hundred thousands years ago.
>> Correct
or
>> Dinosaur and reptiles existed hundred thousands years ago.
We are the products from cutting-edged technology of evolution.
>> We are products from a cutting-edge technology of evolution.
By the way, return to the topic, I am certain that the existence of the aliens must be over the universe.
>> By the way, going back to the topic, I am certain that the existence of aliens must be past the universe.
But it will not be the shape of human.
>> But not the same of that of humans.
They evolve themselves in suitable form to be close to their planet. It is definitely logical.
>> They evolve in a suitable form to be close to their planet. It is definitely logical.
This is my opinion:)
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