Do you believe that this is a sign that this outbreak will be over soon?
학생이 쓴 원문
China declared there was no newly confirmed case except for abroad cases.
It is obious people are suspicious on it as they hided many things and punished whistlebloweres. But i hope they really containd this novel virus.
China is communist country. That is why their measures cannot be the answer for othe struggling countries, however as far as i concerned it can give ohers a key, the importance of quarantine.
They strictly banned people going out of their home.
And this is the result. 0 patients.
I know the government sould respect the freedom of citizens, so now some countries are having hard time as people just don\'t get it about their invaded freedom.
However this is a life and death problem.
Publics and the government should have a cool head and choose the best answer.
If they do, they can get out of that deadly outbreak.
As if china did.
강사 첨삭
Hello Yun Tae. Thank you for this. Cooperation or unity is indeed the key.
- T. Beth
=============================
China declared there was no newly confirmed case except for abroad cases.>>> correct
It is obious people are suspicious on it as they hided many things and punished whistlebloweres.
It is obious people are suspicious on it as they hided many things and punished whistlebloweres.
>>> It is obvious people are suspicious about it as they hid many things and punished whistle blowers.
But i hope they really containd this novel virus.
>>> But I hope they really have contained this novel virus.
China is communist country.
>>> China is a communist country.
That is why their measures cannot be the answer for othe struggling countries, however as far as i concerned it can give ohers a key, the importance of quarantine.
>>> That is why their measures cannot be the answer for other struggling countries. However, as far as I\'m concerned, it can give others a key, the importance of quarantine.
>>> That is why their measures cannot be the answer for other struggling countries. However, as far as I\'m concerned, it can give others a key, the importance of quarantine.
They strictly banned people going out of their home.
>>> They strictly banned people from going out of their homes.
And this is the result. 0 patients.
And this is the result. 0 patients.
>>> And this is the result, 0 patients.
I know the government sould respect the freedom of citizens, so now some countries are having hard time as people just don\'t get it about their invaded freedom.
I know the government sould respect the freedom of citizens, so now some countries are having hard time as people just don\'t get it about their invaded freedom.
>>> I know the government should respect the freedom of citizens, so now some countries are having a hard time as people just don\'t get it why there\'s restriction on their freedom.
However this is a life and death problem.
>>> OR: However, this is a matter of life and death.
Publics and the government should have a cool head and choose the best answer.
Publics and the government should have a cool head and choose the best answer.
>>> The public and the government should have a cool head and choose the best answer.
If they do, they can get out of that deadly outbreak.
If they do, they can get out of that deadly outbreak.
>>> correct
As if china did.
As if china did.
>>> As what china did.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.