Do you believe that time heals all wounds? Explain your answer.
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I think sometimes.
Because if you talk about it with other people and think about it, you will get over it.
But if you have been to a serious one like you can never forgive that time/person, it can\'t.
I think if you get an apology or advice from someone, it would make you feel better.
But it\'s not good to make people upest in the first place.
_ The End
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Do you believe that time heals all wounds? Explain your answer.
I think sometimes.
Because if you talk about it with other people and think about it, you will get over it.
Because if you talk about it with other people and think about it, you will get over it.
>>> I think sometimes it does because if you talk about it with other people, you can get over it as the time goes by.
But if you have been to a serious one like you can never forgive that time/person, it can\'t.
>>> But if you have been to a serious one that you cannot forgive the person then even if time passes by, it will be hard for you to heal.
I think if you get an apology or advice from someone, it would make you feel better.
>>> CORRECT
But it\'s not good to make people upest in the first place.
>>> But it\'s not good to make people upset in the first place, so don\'t do it. And forgiving yourself first will help you heal from the pain.
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