Do you believe that young people are thehope of the nation? In what way?
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I believe that young people are the hope of the nation because when young people grow up thay are going to have their job.They could be
scientists, builders and even president. Young people who became scientists are going to invent new thing and eco friendly things to help nation. Young person who became president can change the nation. I think young people like me can change the nation or even the world in future.
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Here are the corrections.
I believe that young people are the hope of the nation because when young people grow up thay are going to have their job.
>> I believe that young people are the hopes of the nation because when young people grow up they will have their job.
They could be scientists, builders and even president.
>> They could be scientists, builders and even presidents.
Young people who became scientists are going to invent new thing and eco friendly things to help nation.
>> Young people who became scientists are going to invent new eco-friendly things to help the nation.
Young person who became president can change the nation.
>> A young person who becomes president can change the nation.
I think young people like me can change the nation or even the world in future.
>> Correct!
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