Do you believe things happen for a reason, or can they happen without a reason?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe all happens that I had with reasons. when i had bad happens or i felt depressed. Of course there must be a reason. I wanna think happen positive way everyday. Also all happens depend on my choice. I took it for positive way, when it happen.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Ji Yun. I hope you\'re having a great Friday. I appreciate your sharing your opinion on the topic. I agree that all things happen for a reason, especially for things that are out of our control. I hope you enjoy the weekend. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I believe all happens that I had with reasons.
>> I believe all things happen for a reason.
when i had bad happens or i felt depressed.
>> When something bad happens I feel depressed.
Of course there must be a reason.
>> Of course, there must be a reason.
I wanna think happen positive way everyday.
>> I want to think something will happen every day.
Also all happens depend on my choice.
>> Also, all things happen based on my choices.
I took it for positive way, when it happen.
>> I take it positively when it happens.
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