Do you believe we have a moral obligation to act happy, even if we do not feel happy?
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I don\'t know if I will be happy or not.
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I hope that you will have a fantastic time with your family.
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Teacher Nina
I do agree that we should not afflict the consequences of feeling unhappy on the populace at large.
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It is possible to feel very bad and sad, and at the same time, smile at work and behave pleasantly, even while one’s heart may be breaking.
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However, I do not agree that “acting happy” necessarily makes one happy.
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Certainly the act of smiling and behaving pleasantly has a non-trivial effect on brain chemistry.
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Although our behavior does have some effect on feelings, ultimately if somebody is deeply unhappy, acting happy does not make the underlying condition of unhappiness different.
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In general we are not as happy as we decide to be.
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While it is possible to develop character in extreme suffering, one is not happy watching one’s children die of starvation in the Sudan.
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Happiness does not suddenly arrive based on willpower or actions.
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If one feels happy it seems to arrive while in the process of other things, not based on one’s decision to be happy.
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>> If one feels happy it seems to arrive while in the process of other things, not based on one’s decision to feel that way.
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