Do you believe your sports idol serves as a good role model for young athletes? Why or why not?
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Young athletes learn from their idols. From small to big. Not only young athletes, but also teenagers follow idol stars. So they have to have a good influence.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Absolutely! It\'s essential for idols to set a positive example, as young athletes and teenagers often look up to them. Their influence can shape values, attitudes, and behaviors, so it\'s important that they inspire others in a constructive way.
~Kelly
Young athletes learn from their idols. From small to big. >> Young athletes learn from their idols, both in small and big ways.
Not only young athletes, but also teenagers follow idol stars.
>> Correct
OR:
>> Not only young athletes but also teenagers look up to idol stars.
So they have to have a good influence.
>> Correct
OR:
>> So, they should be a good influence.
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