Do you buy clothes depending on the season? Why?

2013-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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Korea have four seasons spring summer autom winter. There are big temperature difference in each season. Cloths have two function. The first is the function of protecting body. and Second is the fashion and style. Korean people need different cloths for each season so are obliged to buy more cloths. If there are not season.If spring lasted all year. nevertheless they but new cloths. Especially Korean people are sensitive about the trends. me too.

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HELLO THERE, [이름]! Thank you so much for finding time to do your homework. I admire how you are very much inclined with fashion. That\'s very impressive! I hope that you\'ll have a wonderful time! Take care! Korea have four seasons spring summer autom winter. >>Korea have four seasons: spring, summer, autumn and winter. There are big temperature difference in each season. >>There\'s a big temperature difference in each season.Cloths have two function. >>Clothes have two functions. The first is the function of protecting body. >>The first function is protecting our body.and Second is the fashion and style. >>The second one is fashion and style.Korean people need different cloths for each season so are obliged to buy more cloths. >>Koreans need different clothes for each season so we are obliged to buy more clothes.If there are not season.If spring lasted all year. nevertheless they but new cloths. >>If there are changes in the season, if spring lasted all year, people still need to buy new clothes.Especially Korean people are sensitive about the trends. me too. >>Koreans are sensitive about the trends, me included.

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