Do you buy products because of advertising?
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Hello Emma!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
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T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
If I decide to buy a product, it\'s not only because of an advertisement of the product.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> If I decide to buy a product, it\'s not only because of how the product was advertised.
But it certainly affect to decision of purchase.
>> Although it certainly has an effect on the decision to purchase.
Some astounding advertisement lead me to be interested in a product.
>> Some astounding advertisements lead me to be interested in a product.
And sometimes, I buy the products learned by advertising even if i don\'t really need them.
>> Sometimes I buy products I have learned about from advertisements even if I don\'t really need them.
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