Do you care much about fashion?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t care about fashion trend not much.
It is important for me to fit for my body shape and my mood.
I think wearing the clothes is expressing myself. So without special reason I don\'t have to chase trend.
Many years ago, it took many times in front of mirror, to go outside. The hair, ring, earring...
But nowadays I prefer to simple and the most fit to me fashion.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. I guess people\'s preference in fashion changes as time passes. When I was younger, I like colorful clothes. These days, I prefer plain ones.
- T. Beth
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I don\'t care about fashion trend not much.>>> I don\'t care about fashion trend that much.
It is important for me to fit for my body shape and my mood.
>>> It is important for me that it fits my body shape and my mood.
I think wearing the clothes is expressing myself.
>>> correct
>>>> OR: I think wearing clothes is a way of self-expression.
So without special reason I don\'t have to chase trend.
>>> So without special reason, I don\'t have to follow the trend.
>>> So without special reason, I don\'t have to follow the trend.
Many years ago, it took many times in front of mirror, to go outside.
>>> In the past, it took me a long time being in front of the mirror to go outside.
The hair, ring, earring...
>>> I had to consider about my hair, ring, earrings and so on.
But nowadays I prefer to simple and the most fit to me fashion.
>>> I had to consider about my hair, ring, earrings and so on.
But nowadays I prefer to simple and the most fit to me fashion.
>>> But nowadays, I prefer simple and fashion that fits me most.
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