Do you consider yourself lucky because you are healthy and normal?

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Truly, parents are the greatest blessing we could ever have in life. Let\'s be thankful for it. See you!

~ Teacher Eunice

I was not healthy when I was young, because I have been suffering with rhinitis.

>>> I was not healthy when I was young, because I have been suffering from allergic rhinitis.

My family did not have enough money to support me and my younger sister.

>>> My family doesn\'t have enough money to support me and my younger sister.

I was thinking that if my parents had money, I could get treatment and be happy.

>>> Correct!

I have ever blamed my parents because we were not wealth and I regret it.

>>> I have ever blamed my parents because we were not wealthy, and I regretted it.  

I was immature and too young to think about how thank my parents were.

>>> I was immature, and too young to think about how thankful my parents were.  

Now that I think of it, parents fully loved us and I was living without any problem, because mom and dad save money for us and gave up a lot of things.

>>> Now that I think of it, parents fully loved us, and I was living without any problems because my mom and dad save dmoney for us and gave up a lot of things.

I have met nice people , got good job and I am healthy now.  

>>> I have met nice people, got a good job, and I am healthy now.  

I think I am lucky.

>>> Correct!