Do you do a volunteer work?

I sometimes think that it would be really cool, if I work for underprivileged people, but I do not that. In my defence, there is reason even though this excuse is so lame. I lead a quite hectic life. It means not only about the time, but also about my mind. I decided to spend my time and money for my future, in order to rise my abilities. I do not totally exert to keep my plan for a full day, but I believe my effort is getting higher. About a month ago, when I felt really being exhausted and I seemed to lost my way, I thought volunteering could be the one of the solutions that made me wake up. However, fortunately, I was able to cheer me up by myself and I am still sailing smoothly until now. If I would arrive a certain destination in the middle of my journey and I could get more spare time and money, I would like to unconditionally share my values with others who really want.

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Teacher ELLY.

Do you do a volunteer work?

I sometimes think that it would be really cool, if I work for underprivileged people, but I do not that.

>>I, sometimes, think that it would be really cool, if I work for underprivileged people, but I do not.

In my defence, there is reason even though this excuse is so lame.

>>In my defense, there is a reason, even though this excuse is so lame.

I lead a quite hectic life. It means not only about the time, but also about my mind.

>>I lead quite a hectic life. It does not only mean about the time, but it has also something to do with my mind.

I decided to spend my time and money for my future, in order to rise my abilities.

>>I decided to spend my time and money for my future, in order to improve and increase my abilities.

I do not totally exert to keep my plan for a full day, but I believe my effort is getting higher.

>>I do not totally exert an effort to finish my plans for the day, but I believe all my efforts are taking me to greater heights.

About a month ago, when I felt really being exhausted and I seemed to lost my way, I thought volunteering could be the one of the solutions that made me wake up.

>>About a month ago, when I felt really exhausted and I seemed to lose my way, I thought that volunteering could be one of the solutions that will wake me up.

However, fortunately, I was able to cheer me up by myself and I am still sailing smoothly until now.

>>However, fortunately, I was able to cheer myself up on my own and I am still sailing smoothly up to now.

If I would arrive a certain destination in the middle of my journey and I could get more spare time and money, I would like to unconditionally share my values with others who really want.

>>When I will arrive at a certain destination in the middle of my journey and I would have more spare time and money, I would like to unconditionally share my values with others who really need them.