\"Do you dream to get promoted? Why or why not?
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I always dream to get a promote.
I think the promotion is hope ans dream of all employees.
We can get a more salary when we got a promote. so we dream to get a promote.
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I always dream to get a promote.
>> It\'s always been my dream to get a promotion.
I think the promotion is hope ans dream of all employees.
>> I think everybody in our company has the same dream as mine.
We can get a more salary when we got a promote.
>> Once you get promoted, you will also have a higher salary.
so we dream to get a promote.
>> That\'s why, it\'s everybody\'s dream.
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