Do you dress the same when you are depressed as you do when you are very happy?

2016-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When I am depressed, I cannot afford to pay attention to others like dressing. I will be annoyed by everything and get bothered doing anything.I will become lethargic.I have feelings of fatigue and lack of energy. I sometimes feel tearful. Sometimes sadness comes on for no apparent reason.I won’t care what to wear and how I look like when I feel down. People who suffer from prolonged depression will lose interest in virtually all activities. Those who are depressed are quietly likely to have thoughts of suicide and some of them actually commit suicide. Severe cases depression can be life threatening. If you can think of picking up particular cloths depending on your mood, you are not in the stage of being worried. While when I’m happy, I might spend much time in front of a mirror deciding how to dress up.I tend to wear bright colored clothes. Dark colored clothes make me look gloomy and feel down. It is quite natural that people dress differently when they are depressed or are happy.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]! Happy Monday! We are down to the last two days of May. We are going to welcome a new month after one day. I hope that you had fun learning this month. I enjoyed and hope to have more wonderful classes with you. You are right! The color of clothes people wear might reflect their feelings.But there are still people who just wear whatever they see. I think it really depends on the person. Take care. Teacher NIna   When I am depressed, I cannot afford to pay attention to others like dressing. >> correct I will be annoyed by everything and get bothered doing anything. >> correct I will become lethargic. >> correct I have feelings of fatigue and lack of energy. >> correct I sometimes feel tearful. >> correct Sometimes sadness comes on for no apparent reason. >> correct I won’t care what to wear and how I look like when I feel down. >> correct >> Better: I don\'t care what to wear and how I look when I feel down. People who suffer from prolonged depression will lose interest in virtually all activities. >> correct Those who are depressed are quietly likely to have thoughts of suicide and some of them actually commit suicide. >> correct Severe cases depression can be life threatening. >> correct If you can think of picking up particular cloths depending on your mood, you are not in the stage of being worried. >> correct While when I’m happy, I might spend much time in front of a mirror deciding how to dress up. >> correct I tend to wear bright colored clothes. >> correct Dark colored clothes make me look gloomy and feel down. >> correct It is quite natural that people dress differently when they are depressed or are happy. >> Better: It is quite natural that people dress differently when they are depressed or happy.

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