Do you easily accept other people\'s invitation? Why is that?
학생이 쓴 원문
In most circumstances, I go with an invitation due to my personality. I have a very introverted personality. I would not want to let others down by turning their invitation down and offend them. Alongside this, I do not wish to be treated distantly by my friends by rejecting their requests. Therefore, I readily accept others’ invitations as long as I could fit them into my schedule.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Aciel. Turning down other people is indeed difficult to do.
>>> OR: In most circumstances, I go along with an invitation due to my personality.
I have a very introverted personality.
>>> correct
I would not want to let others down by turning their invitation down and offend them.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I would not want to disappoint others by turning down their invitation and offend them.
Alongside this, I do not wish to be treated distantly by my friends by rejecting their requests.
>>> OR: In addition, I do not wish to be treated distantly by my friends because of rejecting their requests.
Therefore, I readily accept others’ invitations as long as I could fit them into my schedule.
>>> correct
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