Do you easily say your opinion to your friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t like loose things.
For example, if I decide something, I do it immediately.
Fortunately.,my girl friends follow my opinion,well.
Sometimes, if I don\'t tell an opinion, my friends push me.
But my opinion is not very serious. Just simple things.
But it is different in my office.
In my job, I propose many kinds of opinions.
Fortunetly, my team manager tends to accept my opinions.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]. Thank you for this. Expressing your opinion is a right. It\'s freedom of speech.
- T. Beth
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I don\'t like loose things.>>> I don\'t like uncertain things.
For example, if I decide something, I do it immediately.
For example, if I decide something, I do it immediately.
>>> For example, if I decide on something, I do it immediately.
Fortunately.,my girl friends follow my opinion,well.
>>> Fortunately, my girl friends follow my opinion well.
Sometimes, if I don\'t tell an opinion, my friends push me.
Sometimes, if I don\'t tell an opinion, my friends push me.
>>> correct
But my opinion is not very serious.
But my opinion is not very serious.
>>> correct
Just simple things.
>>> correct
But it is different in my office.
But it is different in my office.
>>> correct
In my job, I propose many kinds of opinions.
In my job, I propose many kinds of opinions.
>>> correct
Fortunetly, my team manager tends to accept my opinions.
>>> Fortunately, my team manager tends to accept my opinions.
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