Do you easily trust people you barely know?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually tend to belive in the people I met.
Until now, I have met a lot of people.
All most they were very kind, helped me and have opend-minded.
but I never don\'t lend or borrow the money dealing with who I meet.
because if it is wrong we have disappoint to each others.
강사 첨삭
Hi Julia!
Thank you for giving a response to your homework. I also added the homework you sent me thru Skype so you can get my feedback here.
Keep the passion alive for it will bring progress in your English skill :)
Have a great day!
Aki~
I usually tend to belive in the people I met.
>>> I usually tend to believe the people I met.
Until now, I have met a lot of people.
>>> CORRECT!
All most they were very kind, helped me and have opend-minded.
>> Most of them were very kind, open minded and they helped me.
but I never don\'t lend or borrow the money dealing with who I meet.
>>> but I never lend or borrow money to the people that I meet.
because if it is wrong we have disappoint to each others.
>>>because if it is wrong we disappoint them.
>>> because if it is wrong if we have a bad impression to others.
========================== FROM SKYPE
My detailed routine is as below:
I usually get up at 6:00
>>> CORRECT!
I brush my teeth and take a shower.
>>> CORRECT!
After that, I participate in English class through the video for 25 minutes
>>> CORRECT!
>>> After that, I participate in my English video class for 25 minutes
After the class, I go to work at my company.
>>> Then after, i go to work in my company.
Our company work time are from 8:00 a.m to 5:00 p.m.
>>> Our company work time is from 8:00 a.m to 5:00 p.m.
When I get home. I have dinner with my husband. and we talk about what happened today\'s job or some rest.
>>> CORRECT!
And we go out to work out for an hour.
>>> And we workout for an hour
I usually go to bed at 12 o\'clock.
>>> CORRECT!
My routine makes me diligent but sometimes makes me tired.
>>> CORRECT!
I usually go to bed at 12 o\'clock.
My routine makes me diligent but sometimes makes me tired.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.