Do you enjoy attending meetings?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, i like to attend meeting. That\'s because i can have apportunites to learn about working or life. To be specific, if we discuss something each other, we norally tell it base on our experiences. So, we are able to obtain various ideas and can expand perspective. In other view, I manage to give my opinions in the meeting, if I attend it. I believe that a meething should be accepted all employees \'s opinions. Then, we speak out our thinkings in the meething. Therefore, I don\'t understand some people don\'t want to attend a conference.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your answer to me.
Yes, i like to attend meeting.
>>> Yes, I like to attend a meeting.
That\'s because i can have apportunites to learn about working or life.
>>> That\'s because I can have opportunities to learn about working or life.
To be specific, if we discuss something each other, we norally tell it base on our experiences.
>>> To be specific, if we discuss something each other, we normally tell it base on our experiences.
So, we are able to obtain various ideas and can expand perspective.
>>> So, we are able to obtain various ideas and expand perspective.
In other view, I manage to give my opinions in the meeting, if I attend it.
>>> In another view, I manage to give my opinions at the meeting, if I attend it.
I believe that a meething should be accepted all employees \'s opinions.
>>> I believe that a meeting should be accepted all employees \'s opinions.
Then, we speak out our thinkings in the meething.
>>> Then, we speak out our thoughts in the meeting.
Therefore, I don\'t understand some people don\'t want to attend a conference.
>>> CORRECT
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