) Do you enjoy black and white movies? Why or why not?
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Do you enjoy black and white movies? Why or why not?
I don\'t enjoy black and white moves. It makes me boring. I think the color is an important part of the movies. It depends on people but in my opinion the colors make feel more interesting to the audience. I saw blank and white movie once. the content of the movie was great but I felt a little bit bored. Since then, I never watch black and white movies.
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It makes me boring. I think the color is an important part of the movies.
>>It makes me feel bored. I think color is an important part of a movie.
It depends on people but in my opinion the colors make feel more interesting to the audience.
>>It actually depends on people but in my opinion the colors make me more interested as part of the audience.
I saw blank and white movie once.
>>I saw a black and white movie once.
the content of the movie was great but I felt a little bit bored.
>>The content of the movie was great but I felt a little bit bored.
Since then, I never watch black and white movies.
>>Since then, I never watched black and white movies.
>>OR: From then on, I never watch black and white movies anymore.
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