Do you enjoy black and white movies? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Black and white is neat, open, and deep.
For a while, I thought that black and white was old.
Everything changed from black and white to color in the early 1970s.
It was a beauty and it was amazing to have color.
I was married at that time and took a color picture.
Now, 50 years later, when I watch black and white movies, I only have memories,
Now I do not enjoy black and white movies.
The splendor and feeling that color gives, we find things to enjoy in color.
I think that black and white movies probably won\'t come out in th
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Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for sharing your experience on watching black and white films. It\'s a bit historical and it\'s nice to know. I didn\'t try watching one but I think it\'s really different. I wish you have a good day!~~T.Dee
>>A black and white movie is neat, open, and deep.
For a while, I thought that black and white was old.
>>CORRECT!
Everything changed from black and white to color in the early 1970s.
>>CORRECT!
It was a beauty and it was amazing to have color.
>>It was beautiful and it was amazing to see color.
I was married at that time and took a color picture.
>>I was married at that time and our pictures were taken in color.
Now, 50 years later, when I watch black and white movies, I only have memories,
>>CORRECT!
Now I do not enjoy black and white movies.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: At the present, I don\'t enjoy watching black and white movies anymore.
The splendor and feeling that color gives, we find things to enjoy in color.
>>There is a splendor of feeling that color gives which we enjoy.
I think that black and white movies probably won\'t come out in th
I think that black and white movies probably won\'t come out in th
>>I think that black and white movies probably won\'t come out in these times.
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