Do you enjoy Christmas movies? What\'s your favorite Christmas-themed movie?
학생이 쓴 원문
The movie, \"Love Actually\"
This is a Christmas film in Korea that has been re-released several times since the movie was first released in 2003.
I watched it several times because the movie is aired on TV every Christmas.
The movie is made up of different love stories.
The love of an attractive unmarried British prime minister and a female secretary,
The love of a British writer who was hurt by his lover and a Portuguese woman who couldn\'t communicate,
The sad love of a new bride and her husband\'s friend.
I really like the message of this movie, \"love is all around\"
Fathers and sons, mothers and daughters, husbands and wives.
I don\'t think love is a great thing.
It is also beautiful to show the courage to confess even if it is not achieved.
Every time I watch this movie, my heart warms up, and the people around me, my parents, brothers, and my two daughters look so lovely.
I want to see this movie again on Christmas this year.
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday, [이름]!
It\'s one of the best Christmas movies. The characters are so well crafted and to do that with nine different stories is at the very least, it\'s a challenge and so heartwarming.
- Kristine ^^
The movie, \"Love Actually\"
>> A film called \"Love Actually\"
This is a Christmas film in Korea that has been re-released several times since the movie was first released in 2003.
>> Correct.
I watched it several times because the movie is aired on TV every Christmas.
>> I\'ve seen it on TV several times since the movie was aired every Christmas.
The movie is made up of different love stories.
>> Correct.
The love of an attractive unmarried British prime minister and a female secretary,
>> The affection between a female secretary and a handsome, single British prime minister.
The love of a British writer who was hurt by his lover and a Portuguese woman who couldn\'t communicate,
>> The Portuguese woman\'s inability to speak with her lover and the affection of a British writer who was harmed by him.
The sad love of a new bride and her husband\'s friend.
>> A newlywed\'s melancholic love for her husband\'s friend.
I really like the message of this movie, \"love is all around\"
>> \"Love is all around\" is a message I truly admire from this movie.
Fathers and sons, mothers and daughters, husbands and wives.
>> Correct.
I don\'t think love is a great thing.
>> Love isn\'t a wonderful thing, in my opinion.
It is also beautiful to show the courage to confess even if it is not achieved.
>> It is also beautiful to show the courage to confess, even if it is not achieved.
Every time I watch this movie, my heart warms up, and the people around me, my parents, brothers, and my two daughters look so lovely.
>> My two daughters, my brothers, and everyone around me appear so beautiful, and every time I watch this movie, my heart gets better.
I want to see this movie again on Christmas this year.
>> I want to see this movie again at Christmas this year.
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