Do you enjoy cooking? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
When my two sons were [이름], I enjoyed cooking at home .
On weekends, my family used to eat out at the restaurant.
I think, cooking for the family is an expression of love ,and then it makes them intimate.
Especially, children feel emotional stability and happiness .
Probably they will remember their delicious food in the future.
Nowadays , I tend to go out more.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for ending the week strong.
Keep practicing.
Consistency is the key.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When my two sons were [이름], I enjoyed cooking at home .
>> Correct
On weekends, my family used to eat out at the restaurant.
On weekends, my family used to eat out at the restaurant.
>> On weekends, my family used to eat out at restaurants.
I think, cooking for the family is an expression of love ,and then it makes them intimate.
I think, cooking for the family is an expression of love ,and then it makes them intimate.
>> I think, cooking for the family is an expression of love and intimacy.
Especially, children feel emotional stability and happiness .
Especially, children feel emotional stability and happiness .
>> Correct
Probably they will remember their delicious food in the future.
Probably they will remember their delicious food in the future.
>> They would probably remember all the delicious food they have eaten in the future.
Nowadays , I tend to go out more.
Nowadays , I tend to go out more.
>> Correct
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