Do you enjoy doing indoor activities, or do you prefer doing outdoor activities more? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am prefer enjoy doing indoor activities.
Because Indoor activities make me health my body.
and enforce relation with people from activities.
Lastly, It is very fun.
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I am prefer enjoy doing indoor activities.>> I prefer to enjoy doing indoor activities.
Because Indoor activities make me health my body.
Because Indoor activities make me health my body.
>> Because indoor activities make my body healthy.
and enforce relation with people from activities.
and enforce relation with people from activities.
>> It also enforces good relation from people while doing the activity.
Lastly, It is very fun.
Lastly, It is very fun.
>> Lastly, it is very fun.
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