Do you enjoy eating vegetables? Why or why not? What are your favorite or least favorite vegetables?
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Hi Eva,
Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s interesting how your early experiences with food shaped your current habits. It’s great that you’ve grown to enjoy vegetables and recognize their benefits for your health. Eating vegetables every day is a wonderful habit that helps keep you healthy and fit. It’s clear that you’re making thoughtful choices about your diet, which is something to be proud of. Keep up the good work!
~Teacher Cathy
I like to eat vegetables.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I like eating vegetables.
I don\'t know reason.
>>I don\'t know the reason why.
Since early years I usually eat vegetables, because my parents didn\'t have enough money to buy meat.
>>Since my early years, I usually ate vegetables because my parents didn\'t have enough money to buy meat.
Sometime we could eat meat, the day was family\'s birthday and national holiday.
>>Sometimes we could eat meat on family birthdays and national holidays.
Before l know it I eating vegetables has become a habit.
>>Before I knew it, eating vegetables had become a habit.
Now that I think about it, to eat vegetables good for healthy.
>>Now that I think about it, eating vegetables is good for health.
To eat vegetables helpful weight less, can make healthy body.
>>Eating vegetables helps with weight loss and can lead to a healthy body.
So I eat vegetables every day.
>>CORRECT
OR>>That\'s why I eat vegetables every day.
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