Do you enjoy having people over to your house?
학생이 쓴 원문
To be honest, I don\'t like people having over to my house and enjoying it loudly.
The reason is I don\'t prefer my home to be noisy.
In addition, I think that the house should make us rest conveniently.
However, I welcome everyone visiting my house whenever.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I wish I can visit you someday.
I want you to show me around.
We never know what will happen in the future.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
To be honest, I don\'t like people having over to my house and enjoying it loudly.
>> To be honest, I don\'t like having people over to my house and being loud.
The reason is I don\'t prefer my home to be noisy.
The reason is I don\'t prefer my home to be noisy.
>> The reason is I don\'t like my home to be noisy.
In addition, I think that the house should make us rest conveniently.
In addition, I think that the house should make us rest conveniently.
>> In addition, I think that people should rest comfortably in their own homes.
However, I welcome everyone visiting my house whenever.
However, I welcome everyone visiting my house whenever.
>> Correct
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