Do you enjoy holidays?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes! I have enjoyed holidays and I am looking forward to having another holiday. On holiday, I used to be with whole family with making a foods or just talking or going somewhere. However for now, I spend holiday with watching netflix and finding a pretty cafe and taking a walk. Both type of holidays are really enjoyable for me. It can be depend on the situations. As other people do, having a holiday make me refresh.
I am on kind of vacation now because my son participates in Youth Ice Hockey Olympic in Gangneung where is very near East Sea of South Korea. I am planning to visit the beach and eat some famous dishes after the Olympic over. This is a benefit which the holiday can give us.
강사 첨삭
Hello Young Won! I hope you and your son are having a great time in Gangneung.
Holidays make our lives lighter as they are a break from our routine during ordinary days. As mentioned here on your essay, I hope that you will get the chance to go to the beach and enjoy some good food.
Thanks for sharing these on this essay.
See you again tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
On holiday, I used to be with whole family with making a foods or just talking or going somewhere.
>> On holidays, I used to be with the whole family making foods, just having a conversation, or going somewhere.
However for now, I spend holiday with watching netflix and finding a pretty cafe and taking a walk.
>> However for now, I spend holidays watching Netflix, finding a pretty cafe, and taking a walk.
Both type of holidays are really enjoyable for me. It can be depend on the situations.
>> Both types of holidays are really enjoyable for me. It can depend on the situation.
As other people do, having a holiday make me refresh.
>> As other people do, having a holiday makes me feel refreshed.
I am on kind of vacation now because my son participates in Youth Ice Hockey Olympic in Gangneung where is very near East Sea of South Korea.
>> I am on a kind of vacation now because my son is participating in the Youth Ice Hockey Olympics in Gangneung where is very near the East Sea of South Korea.
I am planning to visit the beach and eat some famous dishes after the Olympic over. This is a benefit which the holiday can give us.
>> Correct!
Or: Olympics
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