Do you enjoy indoor activities or outdoor activities with your family during winter? Why?
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Do you enjoy indoor activities or outdoor activities with your family during winter? Why?
I usually enjoy indoor activities with my family.
We sometimes play Nintendo games like mario party, mario cart or boardgames.
My son might choise Nintendo game if we ask him which is better to do.
I’m worrying about playing games, however,
I let him to do it because this is a kind of lesure sports these days students.
So I want it to acknowledge his hobby, on the other hands, I also have mind to restrict.
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I usually enjoy indoor activities with my family.
We sometimes play Nintendo games like mario party, mario cart or boardgames.
>> We sometimes play Nintendo games like Mario Party, Mario Kart, or board games.
>> CORRECT
We sometimes play Nintendo games like mario party, mario cart or boardgames.
>> We sometimes play Nintendo games like Mario Party, Mario Kart, or board games.
My son might choise Nintendo game if we ask him which is better to do.
>> My son might choose a Nintendo game if we ask him what he prefers to do.
>> My son might choose a Nintendo game if we ask him what he prefers to do.
I’m worrying about playing games, however, I let him to do it because this is a kind of lesure sports these days students.
>> I’m worried about him playing games; however, I let him do it because nowadays many students consider it a form of leisure activity
So I want it to acknowledge his hobby, on the other hands, I also have mind to restrict.
>> I want to respect his hobby, but at the same time, I also feel the need to set limits.
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