Do you enjoy learning about other countries’ customs?
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I\'m interested in learning about another country\'s customs. Since I came to the USA, I have experienced various of the American\'s custom. I think that Americans are usually very kind. Also, Americans love talking with people.
For instance, when I go to the grocery store, \"How are you?\" a staff member who doesn\'t know the person asks me. In addition, I often saw that while I am taking a walk, people who I don\'t know say hello to each other. When I came to the USA, for the first time, I avoided people who speak English. Because people who don\'t know tried to talk to me when their eyes were facing me. Now, I know that is their custom. So I don\'t avoid them so far.
I\'m obviously interested in learning about another country\'s customs. But it is sometimes hard to adjust to me. I want to understand their customs as much as I can. It takes time to understand and act another country\'s custom. It\'s as important as learning a language.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ji [이름], thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin.
I\'m interested in learning about another country\'s customs.
>>I\'m interested to learn about other countries customs.
Since I came to the USA, I have experienced various of the American\'s custom.
>>Since I came to the USA, I have experienced various American tradition and customs.
I think that Americans are usually very kind. Also, Americans love talking with people.
>>I think Americans are usually very kind and they also love talking to people.
For instance, when I go to the grocery store, \"How are you?\" a staff member who doesn\'t know the person asks me.
>>For instance, when I go the grocery store a staff will approach me and ask me how I am doing.
In addition, I often saw that while I am taking a walk, people who I don\'t know say hello to each other.
>>In addition, While I am taking a walk, I often see strangers saying hi to each other.
When I came to the USA, for the first time, I avoided people who speak English.
>>When I first came to the USA, I avoided people who speak English.
Because people who don\'t know tried to talk to me when their eyes were facing me.
>>Because strangers tried to talk to me when I met their eyes.
Now, I know that is their custom. So I don\'t avoid them so far.
>>Now I know that it is one of their customs. So I don\'t avoid them any longer.
I\'m obviously interested in learning about another country\'s customs.
>>I\'m obviously interested to learn about other countries customs.
But it is sometimes hard to adjust to me. I want to understand their customs as much as I can.
>>But it is sometimes hard to adapt to the situation. I want to understand their customs as much as I can.
It takes time to understand and act another country\'s custom. It\'s as important as learning a language.
>>It takes time to understand and adapt to other\'s customs and tradition but it is as important as learning a new language.
Jasmin.
I\'m interested in learning about another country\'s customs.
>>I\'m interested to learn about other countries customs.
Since I came to the USA, I have experienced various of the American\'s custom.
>>Since I came to the USA, I have experienced various American tradition and customs.
I think that Americans are usually very kind. Also, Americans love talking with people.
>>I think Americans are usually very kind and they also love talking to people.
For instance, when I go to the grocery store, \"How are you?\" a staff member who doesn\'t know the person asks me.
>>For instance, when I go the grocery store a staff will approach me and ask me how I am doing.
In addition, I often saw that while I am taking a walk, people who I don\'t know say hello to each other.
>>In addition, While I am taking a walk, I often see strangers saying hi to each other.
When I came to the USA, for the first time, I avoided people who speak English.
>>When I first came to the USA, I avoided people who speak English.
Because people who don\'t know tried to talk to me when their eyes were facing me.
>>Because strangers tried to talk to me when I met their eyes.
Now, I know that is their custom. So I don\'t avoid them so far.
>>Now I know that it is one of their customs. So I don\'t avoid them any longer.
I\'m obviously interested in learning about another country\'s customs.
>>I\'m obviously interested to learn about other countries customs.
But it is sometimes hard to adjust to me. I want to understand their customs as much as I can.
>>But it is sometimes hard to adapt to the situation. I want to understand their customs as much as I can.
It takes time to understand and act another country\'s custom. It\'s as important as learning a language.
>>It takes time to understand and adapt to other\'s customs and tradition but it is as important as learning a new language.
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