Do you enjoy live music? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t enjoy live music. I don\'t enjoy it because i just do not like \'live\' things. I also hate youtube channels. The main reason I hate live songs is : 1) I can\'t stop live programs. 2) I just DO NOT like songs other than (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ) Mom Songs.^^ So I do not like live music.
강사 첨삭
Hello Heather! I understand that you find it hard to enjoy listening to music. But maybe someday, you will enjoy it. Have a great day to you and see you in class.~ T. Lyn
I don\'t enjoy live music.
>>Correct.
I don\'t enjoy it because i just do not like \'live\' things.
>>The reason why I don\'t enjoy live music is because I dislike \"live\" things.
I also hate youtube channels.
>>I also hate watching videos on YouTube.
The main reason I hate live songs is :
>>The main two reasons why I hate live songs are the following:
1) I can\'t stop live programs.
>>Correct. I am not able to stop or pause the live programs.
2) I just DO NOT like songs other than Mom Songs.^^
>>I don\'t like listening to other songs except for my mom\'s songs/
So I do not like live music.
>>That\'s why I don\'t like live music.
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