Do you enjoy meeting new people?
학생이 쓴 원문
I need time to get closer when I meet new people, especially in private meetings.
However, when I meet new people at work, it\'s easier than private meetings.
Because we don\'t need to get closer to them; they are business partners, not my future friends.
강사 첨삭
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I need time to get closer when I meet new people, especially in private meetings.
>> CORRECT
OR >>It takes me time to get comfortable with new people, especially in private settings.
However, when I meet new people at work, it\'s easier than private meetings. Because we don\'t need to get closer to them; they are business partners, not my future friends.
>> However, when I meet new people at work, it\'s easier than in private meetings because we don\'t need to get close to them; they are business partners, not future friends.
OR >> However, meeting new people at work is simpler than in private meetings because there\'s no need to form a personal bond; they are business partners, not potential friends.
>> CORRECT
OR >>It takes me time to get comfortable with new people, especially in private settings.
However, when I meet new people at work, it\'s easier than private meetings. Because we don\'t need to get closer to them; they are business partners, not my future friends.
>> However, when I meet new people at work, it\'s easier than in private meetings because we don\'t need to get close to them; they are business partners, not future friends.
OR >> However, meeting new people at work is simpler than in private meetings because there\'s no need to form a personal bond; they are business partners, not potential friends.
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