Do you enjoy observing what other people are doing?
학생이 쓴 원문
I enjoy when people is walking, their behavior.
For Example, one person is running because he is late to work,
The other is slow walking with coffee, or so on.
This situation gives me interesting ideas when I’m making architectural design.
Because I can make mass design using the direction or appearance of people when people is walking.
So I usually see people’s walking behavior.
강사 첨삭
I enjoy when people is walking, their behavior.
>> I enjoy watching people\'s behavior while they are walking.
For Example, one person is running because he is late to work, The other is slow walking with coffee, or so on.
>> For Example, one person is running because he is late for work, The other is slow walking with a coffee in hand, or so on.
This situation gives me interesting ideas when I’m making architectural design.
>> CORRECT.
Because I can make mass design using the direction or appearance of people when people is walking.
>> Because I can make mass designs using the direction or appearance of people when people are walking.
So I usually see people’s walking behavior.
>> So I usually watch people’s walking behavior.
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